My Pain Poem by sandeep patil

My Pain



One day I saw the pain lying on the ground
I looked at him and asked about his feelings
as he saw me he started crying.
I ask him again and again
Why you crying deep in heart.

I show him feelings
He stopped crying for minute
I seat down there for time
Peoples on the way looking at me
I found my self in the place of him(pain) really it hurts


unkonown love in the Univrse

Friday, March 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 06 March 2009

hmmm.........loved the thought.......must work on the structure............keep writing

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Barry A. Lanier 06 March 2009

Enjoyed your creativ version of pain and empathy.....hope you'll check out my poem 'Acceptance'..thanks for sharing

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