My Pain Poem by sandeep patil
My Pain
One day I saw the pain lying on the ground
I looked at him and asked about his feelings
as he saw me he started crying.
I ask him again and again
Why you crying deep in heart.
I show him feelings
He stopped crying for minute
I seat down there for time
Peoples on the way looking at me
I found my self in the place of him(pain) really it hurts
unkonown love in the Univrse
Enjoyed your creativ version of pain and empathy.....hope you'll check out my poem 'Acceptance'..thanks for sharing
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5/3/2024 5:38:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
hmmm.........loved the thought.......must work on the structure............keep writing