My Place Poem by san santhosh

My Place

Rating: 5.0


sitting in your place and thinking your memories
no one surrounding me except the dare breeze
where you went everyone knows
expect me
now i ask your place
where you went
it keeps silent and the dare breeze went away like you
now my place is totally empty
because i am sitting in your place
so please don't make me as a empty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 26 November 2008

a poem of divest..... now my place is totally empty because i am sitting in your place so please don't make me as a empty.

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Reshma Ramesh 27 October 2008

ah! loneliness........well penned! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 October 2008

'now my place is totally empty because i am sitting in your place' Nice composition. Touchy.

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