san santhosh


My Place - Poem by san santhosh

sitting in your place and thinking your memories
no one surrounding me except the dare breeze
where you went everyone knows
expect me
now i ask your place
where you went
it keeps silent and the dare breeze went away like you
now my place is totally empty
because i am sitting in your place
so please don't make me as a empty.


Comments about My Place by san santhosh

  • Kee Thampi (11/26/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    a poem of divest.....
    now my place is totally empty
    because i am sitting in your place
    so please don't make me as a empty.
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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/27/2008 7:31:00 AM)

    ah! loneliness........well penned! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/10/2008 5:08:00 AM)

    'now my place is totally empty
    because i am sitting in your place'

    Nice composition. Touchy.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 10, 2008


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