My Plan Poem by Claude Davis III

My Plan

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I will walk with you on the beach.
For the entire walk I will hold your hand.
You will know my heart is within reach.
For hours we will lay down on the sand.

With the sun going down behind the ocean.
I will rap my arms around you and kiss your lips.
It will be almost like it is in slow motion.
There will be quite a view from the passing ships.

Now that I have this plan.
All I have to do is fallow it threw.
I don't know if I can.
I still need you.

Saturday, August 5, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 06 August 2006

Lovely plan, Claude. But the last stanza suggests you may never carry it out. How sad! Love, Fran xx

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Sierra M 05 August 2006

I like this poem. I wish everyone had a plan like this. Good job.*Sierra*

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