I'm sorry for you
Everytime that I'm sad and crying
I come in front of you and I say about my broken heart
But when I'm happy I never come in front of you
I never dance infront of you
I tell you about my plans for future
But I never listen to you about your past and your future
Your heart is broken the same as me
I never clean you even when you clean my heart from pain
And told me about golden dawn after black night
I'm so sorry my old mirror
Forgive me and give me another chance
to clean you from anything that you dont like
But I never listen to you about your past and your future Your heart is broken the same as me I never clean you even when you clean my heart from pain And told me about golden dawn after black night I'm so sorry my old mirror...... wonderful imagination...the fact that you are able to see that the old mirror is lively there........ and how says sorry to your old mirror who always showed you in the mirror........ lovely imagaination dear poetess. fine. thank u. tony
(cont.) i suggest: use I'm, not I m or Im, and about, not a bout. and instead of...front you, i suggest in front of you. and don't, not dont. but maybe not using apostrophes is part of your signature poetic style? ? actually, you use NO PUNCTUATION, which sometimes makes my reading 'job' more difficult. but reading this poem, the lack of punctuation barely bothered me. bri :)
i don't care much, nor use much [not purposely at least] symbolism, so......i like to think (that) you are actually talking about a mirror: a glass reflecting surface. and i like that you are, if you are, talking to a mirror, though you do treat the mirror as an animate object, with feelings. and i like that also. to MyPoemList. (cont.)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very imaginative write, sad and full of passion. You write well! 10+