hell or heaven
what is their Difference
when I need you
and we are Separated
I feel cold
I feel the heat
and I cant find their boundary
come back before my hell became freeze
or my heaven became burn
of Feeling lonely
I feel cold I feel the heat and I cant find their boundary.... exquisite expression of intense feeling....... you have a sensual feeling heart. nice poem.. like reading u.. dev
Hell or heaven, freeze or burn in practical life, nothing but what you play with, thin your own mind. In poetic mind however, they may create mental mosaic patterns in reader's mind. Thanks for sharing.
come back please before my sufferings destroy me......... very nice theme. thank you dear poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i have some suggestions re improving the English in these lines, but i won't make suggestions unless you ask me. and I cant find their boundary come back before my became freeze or my heaven became burn of Feeling lonely bri ;)