My Problem Poem by narhari pokhrel

My Problem

Rating: 5.0


No one hear my voice
How much i call them
Then i call everyone twice
One gaint came and gave me blame

After i did cry and cry
Tears sweep out of eyes
To control that i try
Instead tears told eyes, good bye

I remember my red eye
After control of falling
I had worse my left thigh
Due to my last bawlling

It takes a month to cover
I got too much pain
After the final was over
Still it repeat again and again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I loved the way you described the whole thing. The poem was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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