Tuesday, March 25, 2014

My Promise Comments

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I make this solemn promise, to be:

your servant, when, you need to reign,
your doctor, when you are ill,
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GJG Elton
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Anita Maria Lopez 25 March 2014

Thank you Gary. This poem is beautiful. My promise is to always protect your heart. I've held it close for so long, it's a part of me.

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Colleen Courtney 25 March 2014

This is lovely! Nice flow. Could there really be someone so seemingly perfect? ? ? Love the poem though! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2014

good writing, thanks, I like it.

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GJG Elton

GJG Elton

Philadelphia, PA
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