My Real Love Story Poem by Jim Norausky

My Real Love Story

Rating: 4.6


We

stood there.

Huge wooden

gates pushed open

by garden keeper

framing mystical view.

Early morning soft mist faints

as sunshine washes Shah's keepsake

Taj Mahal veiled in jeweled white splendor

stirring two lovers to conceive first child.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Winchell 17 January 2009

Had this same feeling when I met my soul mate five years ago this Feb. God Bless Ten!

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Gorgeous flowing work. Even the words open into a sweeping pattern of jeweled splendor and love. 10 Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 08 February 2009

The last stanza speaks of the untold story and your poetic glory. Loved it. CP

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Anjali Sinha 28 January 2009

pure love Taj Mahal unveiled-- a lovely write -10 anjali

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The heart and voice of a poet...! 10!

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Kevin Wells 24 January 2009

Another wonderful piece. Jim, you are developing your own style and going from strength to strength

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