* First Kiss-(Haiku) Poem by Jim Norausky

* First Kiss-(Haiku)

Rating: 3.1


Maybe ten or so.

Name and face vanished with time.

But not the feeling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 03 April 2009

Captivating. Memories are what make life worth living.10, my friend. Kind regards, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 03 April 2009

Jim, Life perfectly not repeated with memoirs.....10........ All the best, Tsira

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I got a real chuckle with this one! ! ! ! A ten....Love is in the air because Spring has sprung.If you get a chance please read my new poem written today titled Speak Of Love....or RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU which is my masterpiece.Thank you

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I think almost everyone has had one of these. Brings back memories, and that's what your poem does so well. Great job. 10/10 Karin Anderson

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Brevity, the understatement is the mark of Jim's poems.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 June 2019

such a nice write, Jim Norausky. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Susan Williams 17 April 2016

Precise. Proving brevity can wave a magic wand..

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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2016

Superb one.....8

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Maybe ten or so' Rachel Ann Butler

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