Phil Whittaker

Rookie - 0 Points (27/04/1990 / Birmingham)

My Reason - Poem by Phil Whittaker

i leave a mark on the world cus it left one on me,
im no longer a boy, a man to be,
Teenage years squandered on living,
A life i dont wish to live,
Tears and blood shed more like a war,
living my life is a battlefield,
where i wish to be scorched.

Im the general of my body,
but i dont control my life,
the government have ruined,
the very reason to live,
i will not work until i die,
i will not go without a battle cry,
my life will be fun,
no need for guns,
i now have a purpose,
a reason to live,
A reason to breathe
Why i shouldn't make the world greave,
the loss of another intelligent lad,
im staying alive
And its just for you.


Comments about My Reason by Phil Whittaker

  • (10/28/2006 11:36:00 AM)


    W00t! Really good poem, mate- so deep! Keep up the good work. Luv ya, :) xx (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2006 5:16:00 PM)


    i like to think of this one as, like, 'innocence lost'
    great job, i enjoyed it
    ~Dana~
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 20, 2006


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