Saturday, September 23, 2017

My River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a flowing river,
My heart does run to you,
And just like an orphan child,
I cherish your every touch,
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Nancy Nalbandian
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Binapani Mahaling 04 October 2017

nice poem.....very good description.....

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Evelyn Norcott 25 September 2017

the words you've chosen here, and in the way this poem is written that makes me love it even more! My love shines luminously forth - amazing. Thanks for sharing! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

Heart runs in love like a flowing river. Your love luminously shines forth. Great Wall of Paradise also reflects love and emotion. Amazing and wisely penned poem is shared here.10

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Nancy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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