Monday, September 21, 2009

My Son, Please Do Not Touch The Sun Comments

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Read all your books well in day light
And when night falls
Get ready to the bed of Roses.
You may have pleasant dreams
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nimal dunuhinga
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Kesav Easwaran 22 September 2009

'And when you play hide & seek with your friends Of course! You stay behind the Sun As nobody approaches you'... words deeper than what they appear to be there...good work...thanks...10

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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2009

You wrote this one by the Western light. Luminous, tender and affectionate. A poem letter that needs no postage stamp. Warmth travels safe. Take care. Kind wishes, Sandra

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