My Thoughts Poem by Jennifer Johnson

My Thoughts

Rating: 4.5


why is life so bad?
why is life so sad?
why are things so mean?
why cant things be clean?

only you know my thoughts,
no more lies in all these knots,
thoughts of love and hate,
i hope its not to late,

so many people cries,
this world is filled with lies,
oh how i wish i could go back in time,
to fix all my mistakes that are now crimes,

only i know me,
only i can see,
see whats inside,
all these tears i have cried!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 27 September 2011

Very moving, very griping... much attention to emotions, much appeal to the mind. Very perfect in dialogue. Excellent work. tfs 10/10

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