My Time To Go Poem by Muhammad Sakib

My Time To Go

Rating: 5.0


I will be going off to fight now
Love, I know you must be fuming
For last time you saw, I was petrified,
The thousand cries has seen me changing
But how long will you be hiding?

For the basement at your mother's village was your runaway,
Dhaka has seen the guns out
For dry leaves of September was your runaway,
Now cold winds of November has seen my last friend's soul mercilessly taken away
But how long will you be hiding?

Love, the sunrise of tomorrow will see a new soldier
Cry not, for my soul will be of a martyr
If I am not back here
For who outsiders call leader, is our Father
Told us to go out whatever be my fighting gear

For the spirit he created after all rests deep in me
For on and on we must know which side we are on
For being petrified is no more a choice
For we are living in troubled times
I will be going off to fight now

Thursday, November 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sacrifice,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A man explaining to his wife/mistress why he's going off to fight in the 1971 Bangladesh Liberation War
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Very heartfelt, with strong emotions. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Sakib. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kim Barney 24 November 2016

Muhammad, welcome to Poem Hunter! This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site. Looking forward to reading many more of yours in the future. A poem full of apprehension. Well done.

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Muhammad Sakib 25 November 2016

in poemhunter**

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Muhammad Sakib 25 November 2016

Thanks a lot Kim Barney. Still new here. Would have been thankful if you told your known ones in poemhunter to come and read this and give their feedback.

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Muhammad Sakib 25 November 2016

Thanks a lot Kim Barney. Still new here. Would have been thankful if you told your known ones in poem to come and read this and give their feedback.

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