I will be going off to fight now
Love, I know you must be fuming
For last time you saw, I was petrified,
The thousand cries has seen me changing
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A great start with a nice poem, Sakib. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Muhammad, welcome to Poem Hunter! This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site. Looking forward to reading many more of yours in the future. A poem full of apprehension. Well done.
Thanks a lot Kim Barney. Still new here. Would have been thankful if you told your known ones in poem to come and read this and give their feedback.
Thanks a lot Kim Barney. Still new here. Would have been thankful if you told your known ones in poemhunter to come and read this and give their feedback.
Very heartfelt, with strong emotions. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing.