Friday, April 17, 2015

My Troubled Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's this girl, whose in need
We're good friends, yes indeed
I always wonder, whats the matter?
It seem like her world will shatter
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Andrew Pelletier
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ANDREW 01 December 2017

YOU ARE DESCRIBING YOURSELF.YOU ARETHE SAME WAY. IT IS YOUR AUTO BIOGRAPHY

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Very heartfelt, touching and beautifully written poem. Patience, when she is ready she will decide to talk to you, it cannot be forced. She is very fortunate indeed to have a good friend like you. Very compassionate and caring rendition in this poem. Thank you for Sharing. RoseAnn

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 April 2015

Only if she resorts to God it will help your friend and love if she is messed up with luv. I enjoyed the superb poetic rhyming here and its nice u sympathise with her in kind words here. Kudos. Do read my poems too but pls comment only on the latest.

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