am lost in this world
of mine stuck in time
as everything slows down
with so much on my mind
as i search round and round
searching for answers
as too why what happen, happens
i was told to choose but remained
silent as my eyes filled up
but my chicks remain dry
visions cloud my mind
as rage replaces all emotion
i feel your pain so i burden my self
but u cant feel mine cause
i hold it all inside to my self
I may not feel your pain, Robert, but it feels like when I read the whole poem. You forgot that pain, suffering and joy as well as love are all universal and that you are not alone in this crazy World! We all going through similar situations some time or another and we all find the way out or the mean to ease this nightmare! Amazing and powerful write! 10+++ Keep it up! Thanks for sharing! You will be ok! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City. (If time permits, please, read my latest titled: A Dare Mind Escape)
holding things in can cause so much unseen pain. great writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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I may not feel your pain, Robert, but it feels like when I read the whole poem. You forgot that pain, suffering and joy as well as love are all universal and that you are not alone in this crazy World! We all going through similar situations some time or another and we all find the way out or the mean to ease this nightmare! Amazing and powerful write! 10+++ Keep it up! Thanks for sharing! You will be ok! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City. (If time permits, please, read my latest titled: A Dare Mind Escape)