My Tsarina Poem by Liza Sud

My Tsarina

You flickered near the wall, my tsarina,
and took aside all of my negative thoughts,
again united as the knitting needles
we weave a tissue of round clothe in verse.

The girls went on march in America,
although it's a long time before spring,
And you come nearer to me, my queen,
Your every step is my dream's making out.

And you will make that all my dreams come true,
and I forget all worries about gold,
and problems at work, appearance of you
is harmony in the chaotic worlds.

One hundread rainbows smiled at me through you,
the sun through the clouds is like hypnotism,
and I don't rage and I write this with ease,
Elixir of bliss is in your step move.

You from the princess, that was like Snow White,
who has deafeated army of the dwarfs,
now has become the Empress of my heart,
our union is crowned by grace of God!

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Мелькнула у стены моя Царица,
все мысли негатива отведя,
мы, вновь соединенные, как спицы,
сплетаем ткань окружности в стихах.

В Америке беснуются девицы,
хотя еще далеко до весны,
а ты идешь ко мне, моя Царица,
чтоб сделать явью все мои мечты.

Твой каждый шаг - мечты осуществленье,
забыты беспокойства о деньгах,
проблемах на работе, ты - явленье
согласья в хаотических мирах.

Сто радуг сквозь тебя мне улыбнулись.
и солнце - как гипноз сквозь облака,
и я пишу легко, и не беснуюсь,
ведь счастья эликсир - в твоих шагах!

Ты из Принцессы, словно Белоснежка,
что победила стойких гномов рать,
становишься сейчас Царицей сердца
и наш союз венчает Благодать!

Monday, January 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 23 January 2017

This is a wonderful poem, and I mean that almost literally - it is filled with wonders! You include reasons for your love of this person, and they are all valid reasons to respond to another person with loving gratitude but the reality of your love is not a matter of arithmetic, that is, adding things up and finding they equal love. No, there is a much deeper sense of shared identity in this experience, a sense of being blessed by the experience, both excitement and repose felt equally. Morally and artistically this love has immediate positive effects, namely, I DON'T RAGE AND I WRITE WITH EASE. But the closing line announces the most important component of this love, because it raises the experience above the purely terrestrial: OUR UNION IS CROWNED BY THE GRACE OF GOD. Your poem may focus on the happiness of just two people - you and your tsarina - but we, your readers, witness this true love and are delighted to know such love exists. that is not just a dream in our minds but a reality on earth for those who are blessed.

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