My Twist On Jack And Jill Poem by jasmine boston

My Twist On Jack And Jill



jack and jill went up the hill to show there dieing love
but when on top jack backed down and left poor
jill crying but when he saw poor jill crying it hurt
him deep inside so half way down he feel to the ground
and prayed to the lord above him to please forgive him
and when jill looked up with tears in her eyes she seen
her dear love nealing so she ran to his side and looked
in his eyes and the pain she saw hurt her to the core
and all she heard was jack whispering 'i cant do this anymore'
so with those few words she needed no more she got right up
and said to her self 'brush off that dirt for your not hurt'
and she left with her pride and her head held high

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