My Way To Heaven Poem by heidrunick dsouza

My Way To Heaven

Rating: 4.8


My puzzled mind
just can't find da way to my happiness
the saddness enstrangles my every breath
and forces me to feel the lonelines.

No value for my tear,
my joy has turned into fear.

The time has gone
where our hearts sang the song
that our love is beyond infinity.
no matter what happens to all
our love will be beyond eternity.

No reason to talk,
only silent walk
Raging anger wants to flame out
you are just not ready to sort out
da reasons why we always fought

Day and night i keep praying to god
to take me away and set me free.
Soon that day will come,
where u will be having fun,
and i'll be marching towards heaven.

Nothing you'll be able to do,
but just keep cursing yourself from within
coz it will be too late to realise
that you were the reason for my sin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 08 July 2009

I agree with Chitra, it is 'a sensitive write on the emotional struggle and inner conflict well written'.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 July 2009

that our love is beyond infinity. no matter what happens to all our love will be beyond eternity.............. yet true love is much above the limit by time and space tunes all through ages and eons yetb soul crunches by the shadows...excellent write by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 06 July 2009

a sensitive write on the emotional struggle and inner conflict well written

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