Monday, November 16, 2009

My Wine Cup Comments

Rating: 5.0

We dance like the boat
With the passions as waves
I saw the wonders of the world
With the glimpse of her corner
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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 April 2010

‘…Her sarree furl while she is walking/My wine cups are rolling in my hands…’ Imagery with tall High…wine cup…symbolizes sarree…intelligently used as metaphor 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Obinna Eruchie 16 November 2009

What comparison you have penned to make up a good description. Nice!

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Obinna Eruchie 16 November 2009

What a comparison to bring out imagery. Nice!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 November 2009

nice comparison, , , good poem

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

great imagery...........well done!

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Karur / Tamilnadu / India.
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