Nirmal Agrawal

My Winter - Poem by Nirmal Agrawal

In morning,
coming out of blanket,
Is like a hazard.
Go for a walk,
Cold breeze through body,
Feel's got frozen heart.
I love challenges.
Everyday I bath,
With icy cold water.
As water drop on head,
Each cell get freez,
But after bath,
I feel is energetic.
As dawn enter into eyes,
Heavy cold breeze,
Touch the body like,
Giving punch on chest.
But I like too to,
Stand beside train door,
To feel the cold breeze,
Striking my body,
Hand out of window,
Felling coldness of wind.
As night rises,
Wind gets more heavier,
Turns too Bitter cold,
everyone switch to blanket,
As I am.

Topic(s) of this poem: self

Form: Abecedarian

Comments about My Winter by Nirmal Agrawal

  • Naila Rais (5/10/2018 6:43:00 AM)

    A nice write..... Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too...
    Naila .
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  • Nirmal Agrawal (4/17/2018 10:40:00 PM)

    Thank you for your review ma'am I Jez Brul (Report) Reply

  • Jez Brul (4/17/2018 10:23:00 PM)

    This is such a wonderful narrative poem..Each scene is vividly crafted...thank you for sharing and here is my 10++++++ (Report) Reply

    Nirmal Agrawal (4/17/2018 10:41:00 PM)

    Thanks for your review ma'am

  • Nirmal Agrawal (1/3/2017 10:11:00 AM)

    Thanks akham nilabirdhwaja singh (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (1/23/2016 6:53:00 AM)

    A nice experience well narrated. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 23, 2016

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