My Winter Poem by Nirmal Agrawal

My Winter

Rating: 5.0


In morning,
coming out of blanket,
Is like a hazard.
Go for a walk,
Cold breeze through body,
Feel's got frozen heart.
I love challenges.
Everyday I bath,
With icy cold water.
As water drop on head,
Each cell get freez,
But after bath,
I feel is energetic.
As dawn enter into eyes,
Heavy cold breeze,
Touch the body like,
Giving punch on chest.
But I like too to,
Stand beside train door,
To feel the cold breeze,
Striking my body,
Hand out of window,
Felling coldness of wind.
As night rises,
Wind gets more heavier,
Turns too Bitter cold,
everyone switch to blanket,
As I am.

Saturday, January 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 10 May 2018

A nice write..... Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila .

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Nirmal Agrawal 17 April 2018

Thank you for your review ma'am I Jez Brul

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Nirmal Agrawal 03 January 2017

Thanks akham nilabirdhwaja singh

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 23 January 2016

A nice experience well narrated.

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