Friday, August 16, 2013

Mystic Monks Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the mangrove bank of the tidal river
lie embedded the mollusks,
they appear mournfully motionless,
deceiving you to believe
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Juan Olivarez 22 August 2013

Love the metaphor. Well done.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2013

A poem rich in mysterious connotations of the kind. Excellent rendering sir..

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Beautiful comparison of the mollusks to the mystic monks in meditation! ! Enjoyed! !

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Mohabeer Beeharry 16 August 2013

I am trying to follow the thought behind this poem.i just feel good I like it Mohabeer Beeharry

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

To see them and write about them a magical moment. A great poem.

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