N Love Survives Poem by Minnie Gehrig

N Love Survives

Rating: 5.0


Love lays on the tounge
thick as dessert dust
N dry

n hot across my brow
thoughts of you
wandering like clouds

pass before my eyes..........

N i am a distraction to my own
enviroment

something placed not quite right

like tigers n zoos

or mothers in bars.....

N my drinks sank smoothly
n your abcence
the fear subsided
as i fell into drunkeness

but in the morning it came back with the sun.........

n iam alive n our pain

n love survives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2012

Absolutely beautiful! A nice and soothing write that clearly shows your great heart and feelings plus your great poetic talent that touches the reader's mind and heart! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! It is a pleasure to read your work! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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