Tuesday, September 18, 2018

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On the highways stood triggers,
spraying on travelers,
muddy blood flowed on the potholes;
as the travelers traveled home.
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Walter Abah
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 December 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Walter Abah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Walter Abah 03 December 2018

Thank you, Jazib. I will do that right away.

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Susan Williams 23 November 2018

Incredible! ! ! ! ! you are definitely a magician with words handling with ease a difficult topic- -this poem comes on with a vengeance...10+

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Walter Abah 01 December 2018

Thank you, Susan 💞

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Walter.

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Walter Abah 16 November 2018

Thank you Chinedu for the feedback.

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