Nature And Woman Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India

Nature And Woman

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Nature and woman
Both are weakness for man
One sheds tear
Another is made to bear

One is ready to offer
Another is ready to suffer
Both identical but different in approach
Noble thoughts for sacrifice as such

Nature is kind
So is the woman very much blind
Gives everything for slight pretext
Without thinking what will be next

Nature has everything in abundance
Women have character by chance
Both stand for giving away the pride
Come closer when wish to confide

Women are worth to be adored
So is the nature to be explored
One may dedicate for whole life
Another may bless for future life

So do we need to be grateful?
Think of wisely and remain faithful
Do nothing contrary to cause harm
When they both are ready to welcome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Such a lovely poem, and written in such a beautiful manner... Eli Chekhov2 hours ago I love the way you are constantly comparing woman to nature, your argument is very much clear and confident. The message hidden beneath is splendid, and there is a subtle passion in the verse. The rhythm is wonderful, as well as the rhyme. I really wouldn't change a thing. I am definitely interested in your future (and past) pieces) . Thanks for sharing your talent. Love, Eli. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i did compose today..recent views +1 SO TRUE

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Dianna Williams2 hours ago right on! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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