Nautical Journey Poem by Ashley S

Ashley S

Ashley S

Charleston, SC (Now living in Phoenix, Az)

Nautical Journey

Rating: 5.0


May your ship sail swiftly
among the celestial stars.

The current of angelic seas
ebb and flow.

A bright star to steer her by
and a full moon to gaze upon.

Moonbeams splashing off
the starboard bow.

May you transcend time
and being floating above
the clouds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Weird. Dylan just said what I was going to say. Almost has a sci-fi feel to it. Nice job!

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Dylan Oppedahl 08 July 2009

I love the mystic feeling in it. I also love how it has the spacey feel too. I just love that piece

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Ashley S

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Charleston, SC (Now living in Phoenix, Az)
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