You need not rush
Without force Just push
The structure may come down
The saying is well known
Wait for opportune time
Strike hard when needed any time
Entire opposition may collapse
May be due to burden and their lapses
You need not worry
But concentrate on strategy and not to hurry
People may suffer on account of their folly
Come in terms with reality and feel sorry
Keep on mind only one thing
Keep your flank protected for right thing
If you leave it unattended
You will simply be surrounded
Wait till enemy gets exhausted
Allow him to be little rested
He will get biggest surprise
When he will witness fall instead of rise
I love it Manzen1 minute ago i love the rhyme. Good job Comment +1 Inspiring
I Joshua Furtado1 minute ago Very well put together, some rhyme is off (it seems you were going for it, but the words do not rhyme although the spelling would appear otherwise) other than that, nice job.
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I would like to translate this poem
Ok, but work needed Willum Shaw18 minutes ago I could really like it, but it sounds like it is trying to rhyme a bit too much- especially the third and last paragraph