Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Need Not Rush - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You need not rush
Without force Just push
The structure may come down
The saying is well known

Wait for opportune time
Strike hard when needed any time
Entire opposition may collapse
May be due to burden and their lapses

You need not worry
But concentrate on strategy and not to hurry
People may suffer on account of their folly
Come in terms with reality and feel sorry

Keep on mind only one thing
Keep your flank protected for right thing
If you leave it unattended
You will simply be surrounded

Wait till enemy gets exhausted
Allow him to be little rested
He will get biggest surprise
When he will witness fall instead of rise

Comments about Need Not Rush by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    Ok, but work needed

    Willum Shaw18 minutes ago
    I could really like it, but it sounds like it is trying to rhyme a bit too much- especially the third and last paragraph
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2013 10:31:00 AM)

    I love it

    Manzen1 minute ago
    i love the rhyme. Good job
    Comment +1
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    Joshua Furtado1 minute ago
    Very well put together, some rhyme is off (it seems you were going for it, but the words do not rhyme although the spelling would appear otherwise) other than that, nice job.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2013 10:23:00 AM)

    You need not rush
    Without force Just push
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 8, 2013

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