Thursday, January 7, 2010

Needing Nothing. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love needs no words.
Words only require more from love.

Dreams need no thought.
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Fay Slimm
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John Knight 17 January 2010

Hi Fay - This is a lovely poem about five of the most important human qualities / emotions we can experience. love - dreams - faith - peace and hope. Your poem assures us that respectively these qualities require - no words - no thought - no time - no reason and no motive. I agree with you Fay because the qualities are pure and complete in themselves and in their intensity. We can therefore add nothing to them and, a priori, take nothing from them. I am glad you began and ended with love because the greatest of these qualities is LOVE. Excellent i score it a TEN. Love you in poetry - JOHN

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Bob Blackwell 07 January 2010

Six couplets full of love and truth. Thanks Fay. Bob

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Carol Gall 07 January 2010

lovely and so true love never needs words 10

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Fay Slimm

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