Needing You Poem by Brian Roe

Needing You

Rating: 5.0


Softer than shadow
fingers upon my skin
hot as hell fire
passion burning begins
feel me deep within
griping to the core
desire takes over
hold me to your body
lay with me again
never let me go
a living embrace
breath upon my face
I will chase you,
and let love run its course.

Monday, January 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love,passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
remembering my time with her, reliving the moments of beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 January 2018

I love the rhyme of desire, passion, and love - an ecstatic combination that resonates with the vibration of pure bliss. Lovely and very passionate piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Stay enriched Brain.

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Romantic poem, well penned

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