Sunday, November 4, 2007

Needlewoman Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the fading light of my neighboring Seamstress's room.
The poor widow does embroidery of the mysterious life pattern.
I too have some darn work of my patchy clothes
And I want to borrow a needle and a thread from you.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 05 November 2007

A sweet romantic poem about loneliness. May all your needlewomen widows find solace and new beginnings. Beautiful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Thad Wilk 04 November 2007

Excellent Nimal! short and sweet and to the point. The needle point that is! A (10) ! Thad

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Sandra Fowler 04 November 2007

Rich, suggestive and very poignant. I wish tthe seamstress and her night visitor well. Excellent work, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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