Needs An Advice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Needs An Advice

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Needs an advice
Friday,28th January 2022
Life becomes miserable
if it remains devoid of struggle
no one to scold or appreciate as an individual
it creates only troubles
What did parents give?
work hard and live
with contentment
and present yourself
when you grow
you won't allow
yourself to follow
the things that slow down
you need a good friend
to guide you till an end
a wife or parents
to make a dent on false pride
when you become a parent
you need someone to bend
and send you a caution
with mild reaction
this is not the restriction
it is an advice or instruction
that flows from eyes
and tries to convey
life needs a powerful enemy too
that makes you hurry
and carry the mission
without letting the confusion
Dr Hasmukh Mehta
D.Litt, Folt
World poet laureate
© Hasmukh A. Mehta

Needs An Advice
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
and carry the mission without letting the confusion Dr Hasmukh Mehta D.Litt, Folt World poet laureate © Hasmukh A. Mehta
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta WELCOME.... Montanucci Bardella Reply4 d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta WELCOME.. Giovanni Battista Reply4 d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta WELCOME... Gulberto Castro Castro

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta WELCOME.... Karma La Vinod Fullee

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta WELCOME....Ramananda Haloi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 February 2022

Hasmikh Mehta an enemy and advisor, both will help us grow. Good poem, Hasmukh jee. The value of advice, instructions, and ethics are beautifully given. Padma, Hyderabad, Jan 28,2022

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 February 2022

welcome. Giovanni Battista Montanucci Bardella

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 February 2022

welcome/...Ry Arouf Ulla

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 February 2022

welcome/... Ramananda Haloi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 February 2022

welcome/.. i Karma La Vinod Fullee

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