Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Neferet's Lost Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hate that I have to wait for you
All though it makes me want to kill you more…
It kind of makes me wonder,
What am I waiting for?
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Jay'Reeona Collins
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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Well thought and nicely brought with conviction. A work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Jay. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Jayreeona Collins 18 October 2017

Thank you, and I will read your poem.

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