Nepal* Poem by elysabeth faslund

Nepal*

Rating: 5.0


Sandstone talons etched your name, tested your ripeness,
Signaled to eagle-high ledges...
A foot rose, fell, and your soul was at one with the peak.
You became one with the mountain...
Did it become one with you...
Did you both journey higher, lower, or to the side.
Hard to hide a mountain, easy to cover a soul,
Until Eternity's dust settles...
Other mountains, other souls, waiting within the air.
Did you seek, along the path, a higher point...
Did it seek one further along the journey...shadows
Cast by the light.

Hard to move a mountain, easy to swallow a soul.
Can one swallow the mountain
Without moving the soul.
Joy. Resolve.
Celebration silence
Merging to dawn waves
Answering twilight questions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 12 December 2007

We cannot escape our affinity or, more correctly, our necessary involvement with nature. If we accept ourselves we must accept everything - the time, the place, the everything. We are here. We are alive. We are now. I think this poem and a lot of your other poems bears witness to this one truth.

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Not a member No 4 05 February 2007

Powerful almost hypnotic language. Strong on concretes and abstractions. Rich convincing imagery. Metaphysically and psychologically questioning and troubling. Fascinating piece of high quality poetry.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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