Friday, July 13, 2012

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I've never known you
Or the love of a father
No I lied
The love I felt
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Brittany Fegley
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Leanna Ward 13 July 2012

I totally understand how you felt in this poem considering I didn't have a father growing up. Good work. Check out some of mine if you get the chance. thanks.

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Leanna Ward 13 July 2012

I totally understand how you felt in this poem. It was really good. Check out some of mine. Thanks (:

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 July 2012

Our last generation of youngsters did not feel this much of pain, as we lived as a community in a small visible areas, where the children communicate with the elders and the peers. Children hate their parents, in spite of having better monetary comforts, which means love is more important than anything else.. a poem which expresses the feeling of an youngster..

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Brittany Fegley

Brittany Fegley

Corning NY
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