New Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

New Love

Rating: 5.0


It makes me to wonder
To think about cloud’s thunder
Light’s appearance with darkness all over
Everyone run’s for safe passage or shelter

I find it so much wonderful
It takes me away to feel cheerful
Love has tremendous strength
Can go to any end with length

I did not know this before
That her love will drag me to shore
Shore of far sea in another continental
She has deep root and link of ancestral land

She conveys me through her poetry
With all the feelings not found in dictionary
I feel each work as if she speaks near by
I sink in deep thought and try

She may be sure of her intent
But I miss her in memory at present
I vividly paint her in my dreamy land
She is the only close and ear friend

“Are you listening” I send my word
She may pick it nicely and be on guard
She still fears about my whisper and touch
I enjoy her closeness very much

Oh my dear and new love
I hold you firmly and believe
Let there be no unison
But I have not even slight confusion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Re: New love (Score: 1) by Dagger666 on Sunday, December 15,2013 (17: 21: 46) perfection.. The emotion is crystal clear in this, and that is always a great thing to see.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Dead Nation Scholar The emotion is crystal clear in this, and that is always a great thing to see.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2013

Overall good Valentina Zamora6 minutes ago Iffy rhyming, beautiful wording.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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