Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 422,541 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

New Oder - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

What can man do to live immortal?
Even thought any accident can prove fatal
Person can be no more on the spot
This led me seriously to think a lot

What are we today on present age?
Nothing but a small fly and unable to manage
What are we struggling and what for?
I had sought an answer but did not go far

Many people like for what I am today
Some adversely remark and few find nice way
Talk freely with their problems and ask advice
I render it freely that makes them to dream high with promises

An art itself is divine gift
You can do nothing with its shift
It may vanish any time with passing of time
Or remain with you for little longer time

Poetry as such is an obsession
That can't be turned into passion
It has to origin from one's own heart
The words and narration simply comes out as an art

Some of the verses may flow like river water
Carry readers along and leave them later
It is some sort of hidden bond that remains forever
Many old poets have occupied position as such there

Today's generation passes through crucial stage
Computers have reduced the scope of pen and page
Everything is instant and available before eyes
Poems may go extinct in years that may go by

Let us hope for some new order
Young poets appear permanently here and there
We shall not remain here for them to watch
Even through thorough our poems they shall try to catch


Comments about New Oder by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 5:15:00 AM)


    Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje8 minutes ago Interesting, very. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 5:15:00 AM)


    VERY GOOD Edward Wilkes8 minutes ago Young poets have much to say, but need to realize better will be said as comes to light thru time, only if they become more open to the world and the poets of old. Comment +1 Age of the lines.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 5:14:00 AM)


    What can man do to live immortal?
    Even thought any accident can prove fatal
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 5:01:00 AM)


    What can man do to live immortal?
    Even thought any accident can prove fatal
    Person can be no more on the spot
    This led me seriously to think a lot
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012



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