Jade's Pain

Rookie (September 7 / La La Land)

Newly Found 'secret' Love! ! ! - Poem by Jade's Pain

I have a secret love, one that must not be spoken of.
She's beautiful & I secretly admire her soft spoken ways.
Why cant she notice me? Why cant I be seen by her?
She's an amazing girl & I want to experience life with
her. She'll succeed in many ways & I'll be stuck here
just to watch it all happen.
Then I wake up from the nightmare of being alone without
her & now all my wishes are granted, she's with me. We no
longer walk as two but as one. Oh how faith works in mysterious
ways. I would have only dreamed about being with her but
now she's mine....all mine. Now i'm happy because I have
my newly found love! ! !
Now it's no secret...


Comments about Newly Found 'secret' Love! ! ! by Jade's Pain

  • Mark Nwagwu (4/19/2008 6:49:00 AM)


    you just dont walk as two now you have your dream love. Melt into her that you may become her and then you lose yourself - that's what i think love is all about - to lose yourself in another. a good write. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/17/2008 8:22:00 PM)


    YAY I wrote this beautiful poem! ! WOOT WOOT! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 11, 2008


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