Next To Almighty Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Next To Almighty

Rating: 2.8


No one can beat
No one can greet
No one can create
Such position to relate

Father is such figure
Everybody will be sure
Of his dominant position
At home and out side without confusion

He is there to look after
Take possible precaution and care
So no harm is caused
Each word is fulfilled as promised

Children are only asset
He makes it to let
Everybody should know his view
Such kind of people are only few

He is harsh too
But lovely and true
Very soft spoken and mild at heart
He has that kind of art

He works for entire family
Keeps us in smiles and ready
No worry ever crosses our mind
He is suitably creates position so kind

He has no other desire
Except to keep us in happy environment
No more trouble and no more struggles
He is dedicated and very much capable

We must bow our head
Pay the respect and read
His wishes too for our safety
He is next to Almighty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2013

Re: Next to almighty by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, November 12,2013 (17: 49: 52) I do not think this poet's English is very clear...ergo, this poem is not clear, but quite difficult to understand...perhaps I am wrong, but it seems to be describing a very autocratic, controlling, and harsh man, who, despite his apparently unpleasant personality characteristics, is nevertheless loved by the family he dominates... Re: Next to almighty (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Wednesday, November 13,2013 (06: 48: 18) thanks for your harsh comment.. evaluate father in your English and post me as I shall love to your brilliance and capacity. regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

Well written Jan Spiljard7 minutes ago Very descriptive. I can see what the poems says before me. Well written indeed. Comment +1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago that is magic of poem

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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