Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Night Thoughts Comments

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The silence of night no longer induces sleep
Deep reverberating thoughts waken my brain
Through closed eyelids I am reliving the past
Random life experiences indelibly remain
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Working Title 04 September 2007

'Giving witness to a reminiscing parade' I really know what you mean! Myabe that's why I'm up at 2: 00 am writing poetry. Nicely written, thanks!

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Theodora Onken 04 September 2007

Theresa, this is a most magnificiently put together poem...showing great contemplation about something troubling you that has never quite gone away, until, maybe now! I identify! Great write. Theo

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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