Sunday, September 29, 2013

Nightmare Comments

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I was outdoors
The air was cold and clear
I was walking in a mountain path
And I was passing by
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Ana Shatzy
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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2013

Wow, you fell, and so did I! Lols :) An excellent description of a nightmare, thanks for taking us along. Well done.

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Princess Lilypad 29 September 2013

wow, neat concept. this could be metaphorically about so many things. I do understand on my own level. so different, your writing. I like it very much.

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