Sunday, November 15, 2015

Nightmares Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wished sometimes
If I could go back to those times,
Where I whispered to you
The mystery of us,
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Alavi Maliha
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Chinedu Dike 07 March 2017

Deep feelings expressed in a well articulated piece nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Dimitrios Galanis 30 May 2016

Find another wording for the last verse.The poem will be great too.

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Seema Jayaraman 15 November 2015

Love lost, time now spent remembering whispered nights, .. now the nights appear like nightmares, well drafted with such few words, thanks for sharing

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Alavi Maliha 18 November 2015

i'm glad :) thanks

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Seema Jayaraman 15 November 2015

Love lost, appears like a never ending nightmare, well drafted with such few lines.. thanks for sharing

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