Nightmares Poem by elisha sabacajan

Nightmares

Rating: 4.8


A deja vu in her dream,
comes in reality.
A man who always hunts her,
now in front of her.
Waving her black handkerchief,
she abandoned him.
Shocked for what happened,
she ran away from the lifeless thing.

Monday, December 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Our English teacher required us to write a soji poem and this is my work.. Hope you like it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 05 January 2016

I have hade a few nightmares in my life time.

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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2015

A good narrative poem depicting real life affliction of what one abhorred most in nightmares, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Elisha. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2015

A man who hunts, come after sometimes in front and then at the back. Dreams are some kind of explanations of something related to real life. Are you really i need of saying goodbye to one who takes away your mental peace? ? very nice poem and fine expressions. thank you. tony

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Manonton Dalan 14 December 2015

hmmmm...very scary...me too I could have fear.... interesting poem

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