No Good Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
No Good
The science may be doing no good
There shall be shortage of food
The population might be at dangerous level
There will be only sufferings and pain to tell
We visualize and forecast
Nature must have our trust
It must be preserved in true form
Else it may pose hazard and harm
The sun rays may fall directly
As Ozone layer has suffered effectively been
We are loosing natural shield
If more damage is done, we shall be poorly held
The glaciers are melting at alarming level
Rivers are in spate and enormous damage is done
At many places the shortage of water is seen
It is feared that the draught may be the future scene
The science has helped a lot but reverse gain is reflected
The human mind is exploiting it and it is badly affected
More diseases and unnatural effects are observed
We need to do something to preserve the nature
Persuasive, but not emotionally engaging Peter Olson4 minutes ago I can sense the persuasiveness and need for urgency to do something. However, I think the poem lacks the emotional aspect within the words. Although there is urgency, there needs to be passion and rhythm to emotionally engage the reader; otherwise, it feels much less like poetry and more like prose. This is my suggestion- I would fully understand it if this poem was designed to be more educational rather than persuasive.
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Save the planet Black_Corleone6 minutes ago I agree Comment +1
True Lubos Koudelka7 minutes ago Nice use of consonance and slant rhyme Comment +1
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The science may be doing no good There shall be shortage of food