Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Good - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The science may be doing no good
There shall be shortage of food
The population might be at dangerous level
There will be only sufferings and pain to tell

We visualize and forecast
Nature must have our trust
It must be preserved in true form
Else it may pose hazard and harm

The sun rays may fall directly
As Ozone layer has suffered effectively been
We are loosing natural shield
If more damage is done, we shall be poorly held

The glaciers are melting at alarming level
Rivers are in spate and enormous damage is done
At many places the shortage of water is seen
It is feared that the draught may be the future scene

The science has helped a lot but reverse gain is reflected
The human mind is exploiting it and it is badly affected
More diseases and unnatural effects are observed
We need to do something to preserve the nature


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 1:52:00 AM)

    welcome mericel remirez
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 10:07:00 PM)

    WELCOME ROHINI DAUD
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:33:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta WELCOME
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 8:20:00 PM)

    Save the planet


    Black_Corleone6 minutes ago
    I agree
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 8:20:00 PM)

    True


    Lubos Koudelka7 minutes ago
    Nice use of consonance and slant rhyme
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 8:19:00 PM)

    Persuasive, but not emotionally engaging

    Peter Olson4 minutes ago
    I can sense the persuasiveness and need for urgency to do something. However, I think the poem lacks the emotional aspect within the words. Although there is urgency, there needs to be passion and rhythm to emotionally engage the reader; otherwise, it feels much less like poetry and more like prose. This is my suggestion- I would fully understand it if this poem was designed to be more educational rather than persuasive.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 8:04:00 PM)

    The science may be doing no good
    There shall be shortage of food
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 13, 2014


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