No I Won't Poem by Ram Krishna Singh

No I Won't

Rating: 5.0


depressed mount of sun
and feeble supporting lines-
will i die unknown?
left rotting in the sand
and wind oozing foul smell?

i don't want the sun
to miss my light and blame
the night for writing
the fate with wintry fingers
licking the legs of scarecrow

they can't close their eyes
to the images i brew
for burying secrets
against a dusty mirror
against god's hidden errors

- R.K.Singh

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,fate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

A well crafted poem.. Thank you..

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R.k. Singh 17 November 2015

Thanks Souren for stopping by my latest poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

they can't close their eyes to the images i brew for burying secrets against a dusty mirror against god's hidden errors. Beautiful poem with wonderful tiction. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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R.k. Singh 17 November 2015

Thanks Ratnakar for your appreciation of the tanka structure.

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Ram Krishna Singh

Ram Krishna Singh

Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh, India
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