No More Lies Poem by zaynab el zein

No More Lies

Rating: 4.1


Today is the end
You don’t have to pretend
Just out of my way
So peace out
No more lies
I won’t believe you any way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great! Honesty is the best policy. Good to stand for what you believe. Bold little poem; D

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Sunny Emo Girl 13 July 2010

oh it sound like a punk rock song...am i right? am i right? yeah i'm right...beautiful song to me

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max pike 13 July 2010

short bu sharp full of emotions, gj=D

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James Jordan 12 July 2010

It definitely has strong emotions behind those words.

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Unwritten Soul 11 July 2010

Oh friend that was good! like it...Simple words combine together to make a final conclusion... This sound good too because u show ur strength, strict and stick to your opinion...if u said not, then not is ur final answer...well is look like a short poem but it is stronger than it look..well done.

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Kida hell it's Me 11 July 2010

i like this poem...she's tinny but tells every thing lol

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