No More Me Poem by totally disturbed

No More Me

Rating: 5.0


Each day it get's harder and harder
to hide my pain.

I feel the breaking point coming soon
This pain will finally end.

I can no longer deal with anything
My hatred for myself is consuming
all of me.

I take these pills they give me to
help with these feelings.
But they do nothing but mask my pain.

I no longer have the will to do anything
I just want to take all the pills and sleep,
sleep for eternity.

Then no more pain no more of me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 30 December 2008

Oh sweetie, I know how you feel but please remember you are a great person. Let no one tear you down. 10

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Quencela Sikes 26 December 2008

I really understand what you going through if youre going through with that but everyone has those days righ? t

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Fiona Davidson 26 December 2008

Your writing is improving in leaps and bounds...strong write...thank you for sharing this...

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