No More Question Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No More Question

Rating: 2.8


I received no word
There was no use to look backward
He had chosen to be silent
And preferred to be totally absent

How can he do such thing?
In life he was already something
I had come so near
With no feeling of fear

He used to assure
Instill confidence and reassure
I was swayed by his promises
Yes, I had made clear choice

Of late he has turned unresponsive
With approach so negative
I feel hurt with lots of emotions
I feel it may result in end of relation

Love must echo positively
There is no place to treat it differently
It must be responded with equal zeal
The feeling must come from within and be felt as real

He has turned all of sudden to be brief
It makes me even sad and provides no relief
He was deaf to all my suggestions
I too have made up mind with no more questions

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2013

Re: No more question (Score: 1) by justsomeone on Sunday, October 13,2013 (07: 29: 48) Quite beautiful!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2013

M. Smith9 minutes ago Liked it and was an enjoyable read.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2013

it is nice Shubham Mirg8 minutes ago it is nice though i feel the author's losing hope. i was hoping for a much more positive ending Comment +1 good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 October 2013

Deep stuff Cody Armstrong21 minutes ago You got a creative talent, GOOD JOB! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 October 2013

I received no word There was no use to look backward

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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