Friday, September 29, 2017

No One Can Be Comments

Rating: 4.8

Black as dark as my soul
White as bright as your heart
No in between that we can share
We stay so far apart
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Laila Stevens
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 September 2017

A fabulous poem..! I loved the way words are place. The lines..No more black and white/only grey that we can share/and only when you are truly happy/I will die and leave you there- quite scintillating!

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Laila Stevens 30 September 2017

Thank you so much! This really means a lot to me.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Laila. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2017

Such a lovely poem, Laila....

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Laila Stevens 29 September 2017

Thank you! ! !

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