dark thoughts that
no one shares
i look the same so
no one cares.
i try to hide from
fears with tears
but no one sees
and no one hears.
(London,15 January,2004)
Simply stunning. The lenght of the poem adds to the feel of no one there to care; very powerful. I will never be short of a screen name or status again!
This is very sad............: (....but its good. Like the emotion in it is sad..but the writing and phrasing is good...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simply GREAT... well penned indeed