No One There Poem by Melanie Walendowsky Baker

No One There

Rating: 5.0


dark thoughts that
no one shares
i look the same so
no one cares.

i try to hide from
fears with tears
but no one sees
and no one hears.

(London,15 January,2004)

Thursday, January 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: january,london
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 28 January 2009

Simply GREAT... well penned indeed

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John Smith 15 January 2009

Simply stunning. The lenght of the poem adds to the feel of no one there to care; very powerful. I will never be short of a screen name or status again!

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

This is very sad............: (....but its good. Like the emotion in it is sad..but the writing and phrasing is good...

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